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Wednesday 12 March 2014
My Recount Postcard
My Writing Reflection
I was learning to write a simple recount in the right order. I found this tricky because I don;t know how to work it out. My next step is to write more.details.
Hajera, I enjoyed reading your postcard. I especially like how you started off with a question...what a great way to begin. You are now working on adding more detail to your story to give the reader more information and make it more interesting.
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Hajera, I enjoyed reading your postcard. I especially like how you started off with a question...what a great way to begin. You are now working on adding more detail to your story to give the reader more information and make it more interesting.
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